Here's the lowdown.
A few years back, I was commissioned to write a story for the 'We're Alive' podcast.
Long story short, it didn't pan out.
But I spent a very long time writing it for it to languish in my computer. I spent that time not only writing it for the 'We're Alive' folks, but mostly for my readers.
So what I've decided to do is publish my initial story here, via my blog, as a work of FAN FICTION, a completely unofficial piece about a character from the series. This is completely unofficial and unauthorized, but I think my work and time spent on this project deserve to see the light of day.
I would like to encourage everyone who might enjoy this fan fiction to check out the officials 'We're Alive' website HERE. It is a fantastic and well-developed world created by a group of professional writers and expert voice actors.
In the meantime, here's the completlely unofficial, unauthorized 'We're Alive' fan fiction, originally entitled (WORKING TITLE: BURT)
BY
BOWIE V. IBARRA
From an idea from the creators of the
“WE’RE ALIVE” podcast
Copyright 2011 PRODUCERS OF “WE’RE ALIVE” PODCAST, BOWIE V. IBARRA
CHAPTER 6 - HIGHWAY 80
It was clearly a gunshot.
Actually, a more apt description
would be gunshots. Plural.
When you fight in war and then
spend time in civilian life, it’s easy to distinguish a gunshot from a car
backfiring, or other city sound that might be confused with gunfire. It crackles like a spark. It rattles the air. It pulses through the human heart, as if the
powerful muscle could feel the gunshot’s deadly potential.
The same deadly potential, however,
has another side. While a fired bullet
can be used for assault, for crime, for gain, it can also be used for defense,
for food, for preservation. The only
problem is the neutrality of the sound of the gunfire. A firearm shouts the same cry of power every
time it is fired.
Burt could determine the firearm used. He could not determine why it was used. The reports surprised him enough to pause the
movie and step to the nearby window.
Dangerous, sure, but Burt was curious.
He also needed to know if a threat was on the way. If it was, he needed to be ready.
Burt pushed the end of one of the
blinds down, giving him just enough of a view to look out on the parking lot
below.
Two guys had just blasted another
guy in the face. They then ran to yet
another person that was crouched over on the ground. This man was struggling with another person
who was lying on his back. The two
strangers who had just mugged the other guy and shot him in the face ran to the
struggle. One guy kicked the man that
was on top off of the man on the ground like a kickoff at a Giants vs. Cowboys
game. The guy’s head flicked upwards,
and he tumbled off the person he had been assaulting. The two guys then opened fire, blasting the
kicked man in the face and putting him down for good.
“What the hell?” groaned Burt.
The two guys then helped the other
man on the ground. They lifted him up
and started running away. The guy that
was attacked held his shoulder. Burt
could see blood.
Must have been stabbed or
something, thought Burt, trying to make sense of the circumstance. There’s no way in hell I’m going out there
with those crazy bastards.
The bleeding guy was having a hard
time keeping up, but eventually disappeared around a corner, following the
others.
Burt let the small strip of the
blind flick back into place. He’d seen
enough.
What the hell is eating this
city? he asked himself. “Just
another day in Montebello,” he said.
Moving back to his seat again, he
took the movie off of pause.
There was Max. Mad Max.
The Road Warrior. He’d done his
job. He delivered the big diesel rig for
the survivors. He fulfilled his
contract. He was an honorable man. All he wanted now was to get his gas and
leave.
But now Papagallo wanted him to
stay. The wounded leader tried to coax
the recluse of the wasteland to help.
The conversation would not end well.
Burt knew it. The moment in the
movie took on a new meaning since the day he reached a breaking point years ago
during his time in Desert Storm, near the Kuwait-Iraq border.
“Did you hear?”
“Hear what?”
“They made Sgt. Slaughter a bad
guy.”
Gunnery Sergeant Burt Scott was
sitting in a tent, awaiting orders from his superiors. Burt was the leader of one division of
artillery support. He was sitting with
one of his team members who was talking his ear off.
“You mean wrestling? Pro-wrestling?” asked Burt.
“Yeah. They made Sgt. Slaughter a bad guy.”
“You said that. Look, Pvt. Keith. I don’t watch pro-wrestling. It’s phony.”
“No, it’s real, sir,” Keith
insisted. “I seen Jerry Lawler fight
Harley Race back home in Little Rock.
They were bleedin’ from their heads.”
“Keith, you’re an idiot, you know
that, right?” said Burt.
“No. Listen,” said Keith, continuing his story as
if Burt never said a word against the topic or him. “Sgt. Slaughter is with the Iraqis now. He came out with the Iran Shiek.”
“You mean the Iron Shiek?” asked
Burt. He didn’t watch wrestling, but he
was familiar with some of the characters.
“No,” said Keith, clearly getting
worked up with excitement. “He’s the
Iran Shiek. But now, he’s Col. Mustafa.”
Burt was wishing he had a
beer. “Oh, okay.” It just wasn’t worth the energy to talk with
Keith.
“Anyway, Sgt. Slaughter, he’s a bad
guy.”
“Oh, really?” said Burt. “I think you said that already.”
“Yeah. I don’t like him anymore,” said Keith. “My daddy used to like him. But he don’t like him now, neither.”
“That’s great, Keith,” said Burt.
And then, silence.
It was clear Pvt. Keith had
something to say that he thought was important. He spoke his mind plainly. And then that was it. It was so peculiar to Burt that he turned and
looked quizzically at Pvt. Keith. It was
like he was talking to himself, something totally different now occupying his
mind. And it was also obvious Pvt. Keith
was totally unaware of Burt staring at him.
Jesus Christ, thought
Burt. Good thing I’m retiring. These soldiers are getting dumber and dumber
as the years go by.
“Gunney?” came a voice. Burt turned to see a female soldier, the
runner for the commanding officer of the base, at the mouth of the tent. “They’re ready for you.”
“Thank God,” muttered Burt as he
followed the private out of the tent to the officer’s location.
Entering the makeshift room made of
a heavy canopy and tent curtains, Burt saluted the officers and took a seat
along with the other team leaders and commanding officers.
Burt wasn’t much for the
formalities. And, as usual, his bad
attitude never sat well with the officers.
“Good to have you, Gunney Grouchy,”
said Captain Peterson.
“Don’t try to kiss me after the
meeting again, Peterson,” said Burt with a contemptuous smile. “I’ll tell Norman.”
Peterson smiled. He knew better than to continue in a cutdown
contest with Sgt. Scott.
The officers started the strategy
session, passing on what they wanted each team to do. Then it was Burt’s turn to be told his team’s
strategy. Things were about to go
downhill fast.
“Gunney,” said Peterson, “We’ve got
you covering Highway 80. The enemy is
using the highway to escape out of Kuwait City.
At 0900 hours, I want you and your boys to send that highway to hell.”
It was a simple command. It would be no problem figuring the
coordinates. But then a cruel
complication fell on Burt’s mind.
Burt stood up to look at the map
spread out before the group on the table.
His fear was confirmed.
“Sir, this is Highway 80, correct?”
he asked, indicating the road on the map.
“That’s right, Scott,” said
Peterson, looking to make sure the road Burt was indicating was the same
one. “Is there a problem?” asked
Peterson with suspicion.
“Sir, highway 80 is one of the
major highways out of Kuwait.”
“That’s right,” said Peterson,
anticipating the direction of the conversation.
“We need you to hit it with your artillery team. Was that not made clear?”
“It’s clear, sir,” said Burt. “But that’s also a civilian highway,” said
Burt, looking back at Peterson with disappointment. Burt already knew what the answer was going
to be.
“Is there a problem with the order,
Gunney?” asked Peterson, standing up straight and putting his hands on his
hips. He suddenly reminded Burt of Mr.
Baines back in high school. Like Baines,
Peterson expected everything he said to be obeyed. Burt felt an immediate contempt. This was cruelty at its height, but that was
the true meaning of war.
Burt knew he was not going to get
his way. But just like he’d given his enemies over the years in combat, he was
going to give his superiors hell for using the strategy.
“The problem is that it’s a
civilian highway,” Burt replied, repeating his stance. “Is this whole plan your idea?”
“This strategy comes straight from
the general,” said Peterson with authority.
Burt was surprised. It was a ruthless strategy. But it was war.
“So ‘Stormin’ Norman’ wants to
blast 80, huh?”
“That’s right, Gunney.”
Peterson grinned devilishly. Burt saw it, and a surge of hate grew in his
heart.
With all that being clear, it still
didn’t sit well with Burt.
“I don’t like it,” said Burt,
plainly.
“We’re not paying you to like it,”
said Peterson.
“There’s got to be another way,”
replied Burt, shaking his head.
“And we’re not paying you to think,
either. We’re paying you to do what
you’re told.”
It’s Baines all over again,
thought Burt.
Peterson sensed an escalation to
the discussion. So he dismissed
everyone.
“Gentlemen, you have your
orders. Everyone is dismissed
except
you, Gunney.”
Being singled out did not make Burt
happy. Whatever was happening was not
going to be any fun.
“What kind of Marine are you?”
asked Peterson. “You’ve served the corps
proudly for over twenty years. And now
you don’t want to play war anymore?”
“Don’t question my devotion to our
corps, Peterson,” said Burt with a sharp edge.
The moment was intensifying.
Their powerful energy was charging the space.
“If you don’t go out there and do
as you’re commanded to do, then I will question your devotion,
Gunney. Never in my life have…”
“No preaching, Peterson,” groaned
Burt, waving Peterson off with a smug frown.
“No, Scott. You will listen to me,” said Peterson, moving
closer to Burt. “Never in my life have I
met a Gunnery Sergeant in the United States Marine Corps who suddenly became so
chicken-hearted in battle that he didn’t do what he was ordered to do.”
Burt could feel the energy of their
space change. A psychic wave of anger
washed over him, charging his body right down to his fingertips. He knew exactly where this conversation was
now heading. So he made an effort to
stop it.
“Don’t say it, Peterson,” said
Burt, shaking his head.
“You know what you are, Gunney?”
“Don’t you say it, Peterson,”
warned Burt yet again. His anger was
turning to rage.
“I’m going to say it, Scott, because
you need to hear it.”
Their negative energy had grown wild like a grass fire in the summertime.
Their negative energy had grown wild like a grass fire in the summertime.
“Don’t do it,” said Burt, plainly.
Peterson smiled like a diabolical
villain in a melodrama. “You’re a
goddamn disgrace, Gunney.”
Arrogance is not the word for
it. Officers have expectations. And 99.9% of the time, the expectations are
met. When they are not met, people are
verbally reprimanded. Dressed down. Then the matter is resolved.
Never does an officer expect to get
punched by their charges. That’s the
expectation.
Today, when Burt punched Captain
Peterson in the mouth, it was a very, very rare exception.
Peterson was not a total pussy,
even though many thought he was. He
fired back with a punch of his own, taking Burt by surprise. Before long, they were rolling across the
sandy floor. Punching, gouging, and
striking like pitbulls in a dog fight.
They rolled out of the tent to a surprised bunch of soldiers.
Lt. Kent, who was in the briefing
and anticipated this, held the others back.
“Let them sort this out, boys.”
Private Keith was also
present. “Boston Crab,” he shouted. “Put him in a Boston Crab.”
Burt and Peterson punched and
kicked their way back into the tent.
“Gunney could have put him in a
Boston Crab,” said Keith to Kent. “It
would have been over.”
In the tent, Peterson judo-tossed
Burt over his shoulder and through the table.
The throw sent pencils and paper into the air. Peterson was surprised when Burt brought him
to the sandy floor with a toe-hold. It
was such a surprise to Peterson that when Burt executed a sweet float-over into
a side headlock, Peterson was stuck.
Burt squeezed Peterson’s head,
growling, “I’ll give the command, Peterson.
But when I get out of his sandy shithole, you sign my honorable
discharge papers.”
Peterson didn’t want to honor the
request. But in the end, Burt was going
to follow orders after all. That’s all
that mattered.
“Deal,” groaned Peterson. “Now, let me go!”
Burt released the hold.
The two Marines picked themselves
off and dusted their uniforms off.
Peterson extended his hand. “You’re a real sonovabitch, Gunney. You know that, right?”
“That I am,” said Burt, reluctantly
taking Peterson’s hand. Before he
released his hand, he had one last thing to say. “Honor your word.”
“As long as you honor yours,” said
Peterson.
Burt walked out of the tent to give
the command to his artillery force.
Private Keith followed close
behind.
“Hey, Gunney,” said Keith. “You should have put him in a Boston Crab.”
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